Mixed signals

by Saerelune   Apr 11, 2015


My heart is a metropolis;
tire tracks across its veins.

In the train, I sit beside an empty chair,
clutching my phone like a highschool girl.

Every buzz causes goosebumps:
you're shipping life into the princess chamber

again, a slight blush appears,
the traffic sign for you to go further.

But you didn't notice the way
I looked downward in hesitation.

11-04-2015
6:16 PM

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  • 9 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Beautiful! I love the nuances and every detail in this write. I love the plot and the executions of actions and how you made the whole scene come together to create wondeful imageries and a lovely message. The story was just so cute, but sad ): The wording is beautiful (: The girl really likes the guy and she was giving mixed signals, but the guy did not even care to notice it and that was terrible. Added to favorites (:

    --- MKKK

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