Speechless......

This piece touches the heart and soul of the reader.
Wish I could say more, but I can't.. its that powerful of a poem.

This is moving and touching. Losing someone important is really hard. But you must be strong and accept it. The Teddy Bear is a precious thing here. It symbolizes your care and love to your friend. Prayers to you and your friend.

This one touched my heart.. :(

My thoughts are with you. Your poem portrayed your hurt. Well written x

The worst part for the one departing is to have no one by the side at that moment and whoever is there at that time for the departing soul makes it so painful and agonizing...a moving write. Take care.

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This was a sad yet wonderful tribute to someone so special to the poet. Makes people want to tear up here and there since a death is never easy to experience, I for one have gone through the pain and this poem hit close to home. Really relatable to people who have gone through, and are going through this point in their lives.

- Moria Bella Bair -

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You can't have a dry eye after reading this piece. Its an emotional and touching rhyme poem that fills the heart with love and the true sorrow of death.

Compassion comes to mind and heart with this poem. Its a very personal and heartfelt poem by this author and its an elegant poem of his heart.

How very sad NightFlyer your poem is, and my Heart goes out to you.
You have served your friend well with this great poem written in her memory.

If it's any consolation, Death is never the end of our lives, and we will be reunited when our turn comes.

Your poem is a great tribute to her and well penned. It is very beautiful and touching.

This has really touched me, what a wonderful piece full of emotion. Death is one of the things that is set in stone but it hurts like hell well someone close to us dies.

Take care, Em

Very sad but extremely moving tribute.
All you can do is make their last moments special and to make them feel loved. I feel sure that the Teddy brought much more comfort than you could ever imagine. I took a bunch of balloons to my stepfather to cheer him up before he died, trying desperately not to make him feel like he was dying so I understand your pain.