by Baby Rainbow Apr 15, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You are back with him again, |
Intense and emotional you really portray your emotions beautifully well here, so well in fact that I want to rush over and give you a big hug. Not an easy write I am sure. |
I can relate what's happening in this story. And the only way to change the story maybe is to change everything into another drafts, change of location, change of whatever it needs to change. Goodluck |