OMFG Dashiel, nominated. I can see this winning the weekly. This has such a person touch to it. Okay I am going to gush over this poem. The imagery and personal touch are what make this poem great, the flow of emotion ties in so well with the message you wanted to say. It is clear from the start of the poem that this person is a person that you care about deeply and love. Okay I love the title before I read the poem and once you do read the poem it is clear. This poem as many talents and has so much experience in their life, but the title could also hold a lot of sadness too, what are they escape from? but you know by reading the poem it seems like it could be a good thing. Oh that ending made my heart melt as well. It is so lovely that you have a role model in your life and a muse to write about, as the reader I can tell that you look up to them and they help you become the poet you are today. wonderful!! <3 5/5

This is so very touching and all it takes is this one special person who do believe in you and make your dreams come true. I see the admiration and love you do have for this person and he is your brother on top of everything. Wow we need more of these amazing role models who can and will change our lives. Absolutely beautiful. 5/5