A Merciful Beginning to Ending

by godlucifer   Apr 26, 2015


Beginning to ending is a story
a story is a merciful beginning
we ask and tell of a beginning to ending

asking is merciful,telling is a story
you ask of the future,you tell of a story
the future is a beginning to ending

the future is merciful of its beginning to ending
the future begin with an asking,
the future end with a telling

the future is mercifully
the future is mercifully merciful
the future is mercifully a story

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  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Also,try to avoid too much repetition of too many words in one poem, it creates a mental block for the reader and causes anarchy with your rhythm

    • 9 years ago

      by godlucifer

      Thank you for the time of day for your review,ssenevol! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

      your so vein
      godlucifer

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    You have the right idea in all your poems but your grammar is off, your diction is...troublesome,if you can work on these issues you'll be on your way to success as a poet

    • 9 years ago

      by godlucifer

      Thank you for the time of day for your review,ssenevol! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

      your so vein
      godlucifer

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