by Baby Rainbow
This is so sweet, and filled with lovely unique metaphors! |
by BlueJay
This is a great little piece from you. The title is wonderful because it makes the audience think that your poem will be universal when in fact it is beautifully tailored to the relationship you are currently in. I mean I guess the point of it and the amount of heart within each line are universal, but still I love the almost juxtaposition here. |