Ooh, this one is certainly interestingly written. I like it very much!

I do like a lot the personal message you have written here. I love how you started the first stanza here with a personal message, it seems to be about love or someone you care about who would never judge you. Then the second stanza leads the story on, and even though you would never judge them, you admit that you cannot be their angel, brcause you are too "dark" for that. You want to be yourself around them and that is why you are being honestly, and just like they love you, you love them for being honest. I love the scar line, it hints at the darkness you both feel, and after they are gone that mark will always be there to haunt them almost. The demons that you both hold, are not liking the love between you two. I love this poem overall because it does hold a ton of emotions. The darkness and sadness are mostly in the for front and I like that you put a little love and or friendship in there. so you are saying goodbye, in their physical body but you know they are going to a better place elsewhere. Great write 5/5

Excellent piece - some wonderful lines. well done.