Comments : Tell Me About Us

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such powerful wording Meme, and the repeated line being the title works well here.

    I love the emotion you have put into this, and how the desperation is consistent throughout. It is a fine battle between holding on and letting go, and I love all of your little lists in each stanza to show what it is that you are feeling/thinking, and how you then beg for those words which will bring you comfort.

    I especially like the line:

    When giving up feels like a cure

    - that is so powerful and so true, it shows that you have tried so much and it has failed you, so the only thing left to do seems like just to give up and let go.

    I can so relate tot his poem, and really wanting someone to prove you wrong on this, to prove to you that they will stay no matter how much you try to push them away or fool them into thinking you no longer want or need them.

    Really powerful poem Meme. I love it.
    Also nominated!

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks for the comment and nomination hon :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What an powerful peace and so excellent written have to add to my fav

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you!

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    This is one of those beautifully worded poems i wish i could write, but too late for me, because you did it in a manner of which i couldn't. I love it and sure, i wish to live it.. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Judging Comment

    I loved the form it was posted it's nice to see when poets take advantage of the was the alignment can be done to their benefit. One stanza flowed into the next it was truly beautiful to read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Stunning piece and really well crafted. Excellent