Avian Amusement

by cassie hughes   May 9, 2015


The trees dance
as the north wind breathes
a lively jig through
lofty branches,
causing smile high birds
to surf upon their
undulating waves.

Written for a club 24 challenge. - 24 words in 24 hours.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautiful, musical piece. "A lively jig through lofty branches". This really is a wonderful write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Love this Cassie, Nominated!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You have such a talent for being descriptive in your work, but in a way where your wording enhances the view of the poem, and does not make it over-complicated.

    This is such a beautiful write, and I appreciate the effort it must have taken since you were limited in your word amount, but you wouldn't notice the restriction because the poem is perfect as it is.

    Interesting title, really draws the reader in to try and find out more about it.

    Great job, and thanks for entering.