Comments : Jump.

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well this is beautiful..... Like an ocean tide, waves of spiritual romance.... This piece is a mixture of genres.... Oh this is lovely!

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Weekly contest May 18th
    Judging comment:

    Well, actually the poem is much more facinating than the average title which is indicative how talented the poet is. In this small gem we read about swinging emotions, pushing and pulling framed intensely in beautiful diction and unique structure. Smartly penned.