Like a Rose...

by GB   May 13, 2015


Like a Rose...

"He loved her
he loved her not".
The game he used to make fun of

and she kept playing.

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In the paradox of those eyes
love's logic redefined itself...
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He's gathering small delights
from remains of city,
filling his pocket with dreams
once were valid.

In the streets of madness,
the vagrant hearts,
the endless cacophony,
he disbelieved Neruda's hallucinations
dedicated himself,

to the mutinous spirits
the smell of gunpowder
to vows embracing death.

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Deformed, the concept of love
in terms of war.
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And like a languorous rose
amid the garden of his thoughts
waiting, she's still waiting

to be picked...

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  • 9 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Absolutely beautiful. Great choice of wording. Very eye catching. Love it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    ..."filling his pocket with dreams
    once were valid."

    I keep wondering if it should be "that once were valid", unless I'm just understanding it wrong.

    Besides that minor thing, this poem is flawless. The flow and the wording... I just love it so much. Thank you for sharing this

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautifully crafted poetry, my dear Samia.
    Thank you for sharing these thoughts on love, enough to keep my mind busy for a while!

    Keep writing,
    Ingrid x

    • 9 years ago

      by GB

      :)

      Sorry for confusing your thoughts, recently politics reached every inspiration, I just can't write a simple love poem...

      Thank you as well for visiting my page, always delightful to hear from you.