Comments : Like a Rose...

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautifully crafted poetry, my dear Samia.
    Thank you for sharing these thoughts on love, enough to keep my mind busy for a while!

    Keep writing,
    Ingrid x

    • 9 years ago

      by GB

      :)

      Sorry for confusing your thoughts, recently politics reached every inspiration, I just can't write a simple love poem...

      Thank you as well for visiting my page, always delightful to hear from you.

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    ..."filling his pocket with dreams
    once were valid."

    I keep wondering if it should be "that once were valid", unless I'm just understanding it wrong.

    Besides that minor thing, this poem is flawless. The flow and the wording... I just love it so much. Thank you for sharing this

  • 9 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Absolutely beautiful. Great choice of wording. Very eye catching. Love it.