Comments : Forever As One

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Oh Saffie, This is such a precious you have written here. Love does many wonders to our heart and soul. It seems like in this poem, the person you love will always be in your heart. Loss is such a difficult thing to overcome when we lose the ones closest to us. I love again how you started out this poem by bringing the plot or meaning to the for front here. You wish for something but what it is, is not told until the end of the poem. You wish you could turn back time to find or hold this person again, so to know that you are safe with them. It is sad when we lose someone but they will always be in our hearts.