by Baby Rainbow May 16, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It cuts like a knife, |
You know somthing that is one of the best titles I've seen I love it... In those few lines you managed to capture the heart break and willingness to not let him have your love again... Awesome saff x |
by Beautiful Soul
Another heartbreaking write here. Love can be two different things but here again you show the dark and sad side that love can have an affect on us. I love the subtle rhyme here as well. Love really does cut like a knife into your heart when you feel like it is broken. and we do tend to let our emotions get to us when we feel lost and confused, so going insane tells me that you are letting your thoughts get to you. It seems to happen a lot when we are depressed and focused on the negative. but I see it is hard not to, This makes an impact on me because I have felt this a lot of times in my life. great write. 5/5 |