LOVE This poem, your best of the newer ones so far in my opinion. I love short poems that make an impact on the author and the reader. This one does so well with that. The first line here again does an excellent job in saying what you mean. The world and our lives always change as we grow older, and in that we have to find ourselves. We always want to see other people be proud of ourselves because it is human nature. The rhyme here is simple but works well because it is not forced at all, it flows smoothly with the poem itself. The story is truly sad but strong because in your weakness you are finding your strength. 5/5