Woosh, this one knocks the air out of you... Just from the first line you can tell that this poem is going to be extremely sad and heartbreaking. With love and or friendship it seems like we always know (or at least our hearts do) when the time is nigh for people to leave us (physically or mentally). This poem does a great job in detailing the sad side of love, a side that I am sure that most people have felt in their lives. The ending is wonderful because it ties in so well the emotions you have wanted to write. The first 3 lines set up well the ending, because the reader is enthralled yet heartbroken for the main character. The story is well versed, 5/5