WOWWWWWWWWWWW, Nominated without a second thought. I LOVED your ending here Dashiel. You have portrayed so much in this poem. The whole poem seems to be set around someone who is suffering from insomnia. 4 AM is a nice time for your thoughts to run wild. I love the detail to each and every scene you have used. To add metaphors to the imagery is unbelievable as well, in a good way of course. There also seems to be a lot of personal touch to the poem, so I cannot speak what you are going through, but it seems to be about a city and in the point of view of someone who is dealing with a great deal of pain inside of themselves. This is a little unique from the rest of your poems as well, Instead of using flowers for good and light, it seems like you used them as a fuel for darkness but that is just me. The ending is your best part I feel. 5/5

I love it and so well detailed. Beautiful write

Vivid imagery and details grabs the mind without hesitation! Excellent and congrats on the win!

Bro ayos thumbs up \m/, ,,,,