by TheMask May 18, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Sometimes I feel like I'm being left behind |
by BlueJay
I think you could format this differently, but honestly all in all, it's amazing- capitalizing the first letter of every line gets a little confusing and not having any sort of stanza break up makes it hard to follow at times. The emotion, the hints of repetition, the feel and voice, it's all greatly penned. |