Haiku #1

by Spectacle of Serenity   May 19, 2015


Gold butterfly wings
great pleasure to human brings
on the days of spring.

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by ether

    This is really great because not only did you fit the haiku syllable count - it rhymes so beautifully! Great technique. And such great imagery. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Totally agree with the other ben...could not read this and not smile...beautiful write.

    Take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely little haiku; brought a smile to my face.
    All the best,
    Ben

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