Comments : Haiku #1

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely little haiku; brought a smile to my face.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Totally agree with the other ben...could not read this and not smile...beautiful write.

    Take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by ether

    This is really great because not only did you fit the haiku syllable count - it rhymes so beautifully! Great technique. And such great imagery. 5/5