I honestly dont know what to name this

by arsalan   May 21, 2015


I fell to the ground
with no one else to help me back up
I fought to survive but deep down I just wanted to give up.
her beautiful eyes, are brighter than all of the stars
her beautiful eyes, are what got me reaching for the sky.
she made me realize, that life is more than "just to survive"
she thought me to live, to have fun and to enjoy my time.
then she left and that's when I realized,
that with each "hello", comes a "goodbye".
now here I am, again, kissing the ground.
but this time i'm too hurt to get back up.
it hurts, and this pain is not like any other.
it burns hotter than the fires of the prince of darkness.
I've been stabbed, shot at, beaten and hit by a car.
yet none of those pains feel the same as this one.
its emotional, and it doesn't heal with time.
because everyone knows, we can never forget our first love.

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Are you taking suggestions for a title? If so, how about something like "Falling stars" because of the tie to the phrase falling in love and the space aspect of the first few lines.

    I like the point of this and how you went about teaching a lesson/making a point while still lacing in how you feel and how painful this moment was. I really think this is well penned, it's lacking certain aspects of style/flow, but all in all it's still mesmerizing and well written. I love the images and the awkward wording (because it gives this a nice quirky flavor).

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "With each hello comes a goodbye". I like this.

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