There is so much beauty In this poem. The key thing in this poem seems to be love, how this person loves god and how much you love this person. This poem seems to be a very personal one and that is something I love in love poems. Your wording is nice and it is simple but the message is really strong. We all think we have experienced love in the past and then that love fades when we find that one person who we have truly been looking for. This poem overall is great. Wish I could nominate but it is in the love category so I cant. 5/5

Marc, I believe this is a personal write from you because this person you have been searching for and love dearly cannot love you fully (I feel) because they are dedicated to God but that's alright by you as long as you have this person in your life. Love can bloody suck sometimes and I know first hand just how much it can suck. As beautiful soul said, we all believe we've been in love etc then that one person you really cannot live without comes around thus showing us that it wasn't love the last time or time before that but lust though I believe no one can ever forget their first love.

All the best, Em