Comments : Liquid poetry

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a touch of mysticism and a feel of the unknown which guide us as a poet. I guess that is what this poem speaks of. There is mystery and I especially like this ending:

    come what may
    never forget what i have told you.
    the sirens will protect you.

    ^^Sirens are known for guiding sailors to their death but in this case it guides the person to its roots or to their goal. Well at least that is what I'm getting from this..nice read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Karla this is amazing, I love the tone you set, it reads (to me anyway) almost like a lullaby.

    Added to favs cause i need to read it a few hundred times.

    Beautiful!