Comments : The Entropy of Our Kindness

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Your word usage is outstanding here my sweet....

    Nature is within everything, almost every message if one reads deeply enough and I for one am loving this powerful nature poem.... the usage of dead flowers packs such a powerful punch... very unique and touching poem by you this week!

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you hun! It's really nice to see response like this, I really love this poem myself! I'm happy it turned out well despite being different from how I usually write. :3

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Daaaaaaaaaamn!!!!!

    I have to say that this is such an amazing write, flawless infact (in my opinion) your control over language is simply epic and the images you create are just outstanding!!

    I love all of it but.....

    "Spring's warmth came stillborn,
    as the entropy of our kindness
    murdered our sense of justice,
    rejecting our wishes, and our faith"

    CrAzY gOoD wRiTiNg HeRe!!!!!

    Nominated all day long!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you!!! So happy to read your comment <3

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    This totally deserve to win. 5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Haha, thank you! I hope it does! Thanks for your comment =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I snuck back to read again......this really is such an epi write :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Holy ****.....this is beautiful, everytime i read it it just gets better! Underbar!