This is a beautiful short write Saffie, The imagery gives us so much to picture in our minds and the feeling you give us is impactful. For me the title works so well to convey the meaning of the poem itself. I love how you leave us wondering who this person is, but also love how you put them into the poem. They do not speak but they make the poem what it is. You have the main character who seems to be in a flashback and the two of them are entangled in a love story. This is short yes, but it holds so much within. 5/5