Secrets Saviour

by Baby Rainbow   May 27, 2015


Only you can unravel the secrets I keep deep inside,
and I think you are becoming closer to understanding me;
which means I finally have to take down my guard.

Saffie
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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Okay the title doesn't make sense when you first see it, but after you read the poem, you start to understand where it comes from deep within. I saw no glaring errors so let me proceed to the poem. I like this one a lot for its meaning, no it is not heavy on the imagery side but it makes up for it, for the feelings and meanings. The emotions here are deep, you could say the it can be a positive and negative poem at the same time, here's why:

    The positive side of it is of course this person is feeling happy almost in love, but doesn't it always come with a price? It seems like they are hesitant to let anyone into their heart. And that can lead to being scared, and that in turn can push people away leading to more negative emotions, but I love how you showed both sides. I think a lot of people can relate to this, 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You are not alone. There are people who do understand and that's when we need to let down our guard maybe not all the way but enough to let them in. At times it is easier said then done but the ones who care will understand. Thank you for sharing. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Angie

    This is a very "positive" write