Stains on the carpet

by silvershoes   Jun 1, 2015


Like cabernet spilling from my lips,
a sour blend of vinegarish red,
you should not have been uncorked.
More pure behind green glass, you,
when neither of us knew the taste.

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  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    A deserved win you have an amazing writing style so unique. This is the new meta. This is what I aim for.

  • 9 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    WOW. This is all what I can say. The contrast is so clear and the meaning too. This was great. Congrats for the win. Excellent. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Milo

    Vivid description. Thanks

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I really like the images. It speaks of a relationship that isn't living in a relationship/or the other is just taking it for granted. Without knowing, understanding two people have gone into a relationship just to realize there isn't anything after all...or maybe it just takes time or need to be tested.

    That is what I'm getting from this read...there is a tinge of sadness behind this write too..Congrats on the win!

  • 9 years ago

    by Claire Morris

    This is just beautiful.
    Congrats on your win.:-)

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