Asking alms of love

by leahxine   Jun 3, 2015


I tried and being tired
wishing a day to be loved
we you can see me love
but somehow its just a dream of

what am I suppose to do
so that you can see me through
I will walk in fire if you like too
Just an alms of loving you

oh God how badly I wish this
the time tears will banish
all is there the love forever
no more asking alms ever

I just wish time come soon
or this wish will drown
for nothing happens
all is just asking for alms

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It was kind of hard to comprehend due to the grammar errors, if you could go back and re-read what you wrote and see that you should change it with other words it would make it stunning!

    • 9 years ago

      by leahxine

      Thank you fairy mary. i appreciate your thoughts. i just want to come out from the pain I have. and im used freeverse poem. i wasnt educate so much of making poem. but im really thankful with your review.. God bless

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