Comments : Asking alms of love

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It was kind of hard to comprehend due to the grammar errors, if you could go back and re-read what you wrote and see that you should change it with other words it would make it stunning!

    • 9 years ago

      by leahxine

      Thank you fairy mary. i appreciate your thoughts. i just want to come out from the pain I have. and im used freeverse poem. i wasnt educate so much of making poem. but im really thankful with your review.. God bless