That Anxious Day

So you being buying those cliches, each one for a peso? so you are 21 pesos off... I wonder what it's the name of that song?

I like how you described the footsteps though. It isn't a bad thing to buy the cliches, we can use them whenever, they always have a used. Too bad many poems have left them weeping on the sidewalks... forgotten. T_T
They most feel lonely.

Wow dashiel this poem is well written. I am going to point out a couple of errors that threw me off of the poem a bit.

to a one heartbreaking night
he was once fond of,

^ in this couplet in the first line, I think it would be better either: without the "one". It would make the poem flow better to me.

Anyways this poem seems to a very personal one. I do love the comparisons you make here to Keats, he had one bad night and so did you it seems so I love how you brought that to life. Something tragic happened on February 17th and it still remains a mystery. I love how you give the reader a lot of power here, you are letting them think about what happened on that day. That's what makes a great poem. 5/5