Some superb lines in this. Very well written.

I just adore this. This is very relatable. There will always be that person we will always want to be with even after finding out that person doesn't want to be with us. I just love everything about this. Great job (:

--- MKKK

Another excellent write, I love how this piece feels so honest and open, like it is from deep within you and you are really showing a sensitive bit of yourself and how you feel about this relationship.

Lovely write.

Just re-reading... I really am in love with this poem. Hmm... I though I've rated this poem before, but it appears I haven't. Haha.

--- MKKK