Summers Swell

Short but sweet, reminds me of Chinitie (Not sure of the spelling) Virginia USA where the wild horses roam free and frolic in the surf of the Atlantic ocean.
Nice work Cassie 5/5
Ken

The imagery here is outstanding! I agree with the other two commenters already this is a great piece. The wording here is amazing honestly, especially the first line, I love the imagery you create with the sunshine and rain, I would have never thought to use that here. but you did well. I can see the sunshine on a hot summer day, splashing its rays of rain over the beach. That is another thing I love about this poem, you did an excellent job in detailing the scene well. The whole scene plays out so well, The sun shining, and the horses running freely over the beach while small waves crash over the shore. well done 5/5

I loved this little beauty from you, well done on entering the contest, it was a short, but lovely write!

This really is a poem dripping with poetry!