Comments : The Picnic

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Short and sweet, and I like how it is actually a fact of life, that every day there is someone doing something, someone dies, someone is born, married, eating, sleeping, flying etc.

    Lovely little poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like how Saffie explained this piece. You really are a true poet, especially considering that you thought of this while coloring with crayons in my backyard :P

    Very true, and extremely eloquently put.