by JaneDoeWrites & -Choke-On-MY-Halo- Jun 11, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Her heart froze |
by Bayan
Wow loved it a lot |
by Enya
Wow this is really seamless, beautiful! |
by Naughtymouse
This is really amazing o.O Collabs are so cool when executed like this..... to write a piece with someone so seamlessly and with such great tempo is epic, it flows as smooth as glass and the word choices you two made are wonderful!!! |
by Meena Krish
This shows no evidence of been a collab! The two of you have set the tone, mood and atmosphere so beautifully touching in a picture frame. The image is vivid and the flow of the write is flawless. I also like how the intro started with the rain and ended with the rain..touching. |
A wonderful collab with nothing to indicate that it is from two different writers. No mean feat! |