Very moving - "we turned stars into mirrors and created a dream of our future" - pure poetry; I love this line. And what a sad last verse. Well written.

Superb poem, Saffie! Love the first two lines and the metaphor! Tinge of sadness there! The whole poem fits together beautifully and, as you have become so adept at doing, mingles feelings,emotion and story in such few lines! Very sophisticated, to the point, but leaves the reader guessing at the end...what if? After forever ends...now there is a concept for pondering?