by Ben Pickard
What a lovely poem, Saffie. Uplifting stuff indeed! I'm guessing it's about a dog? Or am I wrong. But who/whatever it is that has set you free seems to be doing a great job. The last line is so moving. |
A wonderfully joyful poem that shows the bond between you and your dog beautifully. From the opening sadness the story builds as you both help each other to find love again and see that the world need not always be a terrible, dark and lonely place and I love the hopeful positive way it ends. A great write :) |
by BlueJay
Wow, there's just something so beautiful about how lovely the hope in this feels. Like you are so much better because of this wonderful soul and knowing it has made you not only better and happier but it has helped get you closer to your true self and purist form of kindness. I love these kind of relationships and you did a fantastic way of portraying them here. |