Silver love

by DarkLight   Jun 15, 2015


Golden heart,
silver love,
shattered glass,
image of lust.
Diamond smile,
worried soul.
Broken dreams,
trying to role,
bloody tears
eyes with fear,
goodbye dear
come new year"

Pure heart,
with love for money.
Attractive smile,
deep her soul hurt.
Forgotten dreams,
trying to fly.
Every day she cries,
for fear not to ever make it big,
come this year
and years to come.

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    You made the center alignment work for you congrats since not a lot of people take advantage of that nifty tool that we have.

    The first stanza rhymed all the way down since I read it out loud and it sounded really cute especially the ending since it made me smile as again I love dark love and the last part hinted at it.

    Second stanza doesn't rhyme in the beginning but then it does and it's sad since many people are ambitious but not all get to go to the top and that's what humanity is.

    Overall I liked the flow and the rhyme of this piece most of all.

    - Moria Bella Knight -

    • 9 years ago

      by DarkLight

      You have my gratitude for the comment.

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