Comments : Losing myself

  • 9 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I read you poem and it touch me.
    I like the way how you write down, the emotion and the story about yourself..for conveying that you are strong even there are challenges that you facing.

    I like the last part.

    A reason why my life is involved in..
    These certain problems.
    I'm asking for solutions, 
    I'm not getting the diagnosis.
    All I have is the desire to solve them.

    -a self query, questioning yourself.
    Its like wondering why life is so complicated? Why you are the one having that certain problems.
    Am I right? It is only my own perception about your piece. I almost relate to this because sometimes I also encountered this kind of situation. But, everything has purpose and reason why things happened..and every problem has solution. Be strong.

    Great written piece.
    Keep it up.

    • 9 years ago

      by Liss

      Thank you so much for your kind words. I love it!!
      I appreciate the motivation😊

      This piece reflects a difficult and confusing situation I've faced, being forced to go through it alone. And expected to be strong enough because I'm usually the strong one. Feeling so weak had me questioning myself completely.ðŸ"ðŸŽ­

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a powerful and honest piece. Well written

    • 9 years ago

      by Liss

      Thank you, Ben! 😊 I definitely appreciate your feedback!