by Scott Cole Jun 20, 2015
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Don't say I talk funny |
by Darren
I like the emotion in this, but I would restructure if this was mine. |
by Scott Cole
I agree it's alot of donts but I kinda went with that because I wanted all the negatives to blend together because I wanted the reader to know that those things are not love. I used don't so much because i wanted it to register in the brain as not love . I have alot more poems if you have time to read em I'm sure you'll like them better. If your from Va read my Va is for lovers poem I really like that one. Thanks for your opinion.... |
by Scott Cole
That second way is nice..... |