I like the emotion in this, but I would restructure if this was mine.

all those 'don'ts' get a bit much after a while,

I would drop all apart from the first one
like this

Don't say I talk funny
call me a name,
keep no secrets
play your lil game.
break me in half
ever lead me on,
ever yell at me
tell me so long.
mind my business
obsess about me,
tell me a single lie
wish for me to die.
get on my nerves
step on my toes,
give me the finger
stick up your nose.
you pull my leg
stomp on my feet,
run your big mouth
let me take the heat.
misplace your ring
get inside my head,
Do none of these things
Just Love Me Instead.

or

Don't say I talk funny
call me a name,
keep no secrets
play your lil game.

Don't break me in half
ever lead me on,
ever yell at me
tell me so long.

Dont mind my business
obsess about me,
tell me a single lie
wish for me to die.

Don't get on my nerves
step on my toes,
give me the finger
stick up your nose.

Don't you pull my leg
stomp on my feet,
run your big mouth
let me take the heat.

Don't misplace your ring
get inside my head,

Do none of these things
Just Love Me Instead.

Just my opinion, let me know what you think.