Comments : The sadness in your eyes

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Weekly contest June 31
    Judging comment:

    The poem charmed me from start to finish, I think the writer really captured the essence of grief and sympathy in this well written piece. The smart comparison at the begging of the poem, the similes, the imagery which started by describing the main character, then shifted to the husband, making the reader pretty interested to ponder upon every detail. I admire employing the repetition beautifully, that title deepened the emotions through out the piece. Very interesting.

    • 9 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again GB

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderful use of imagery and a very emotional piece excellently written.