Until i'm sober.

by DarkLight   Jun 22, 2015


Today I mark a golden day of being sober.
My celebration of hatred towards alcohol,
only exist in my mind,
12 hours without a drink....
12 hours after sun down..
12 hours after sun rise.
First day.
Second day.
Third day.
Until am sober,
the counting won't stop
Until am sober,
my bar won't drop.

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  • 9 years ago

    by anand singh

    First i'd like to say thank you for reading my poems of faith. This is a realistic piece you wrote about alcohol consumption, that speaks from your heart. I wish you luck with your sobriety. I was once hooked on the bottle but Jesus stepped in and took the craving away 18 years ago.

    • 9 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thank you Paul. will try and stay sober.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice
    your name tittle is more interesting
    busy poet.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks for your comment, Shanky.
    And what a great piece this is - blunt and to the point. Well written.

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