You took what would otherwise be a familiar theme and gave it a twist:

"Legs long enough to run track."
...
"Hands big and smooth,
With a mouth that only spoke lies"

However, after that your originality became hidden.
I admit your rhyme choices amused me:
"world" - "pearls" & "moved on" - "withdrawn"

On the other hand, "implanted" with "granted", while keeping the rhyme, seemed like a forced placement.

I'll be interested to see what else comes forth.