I always love your style of writing, so powerful but elegant. 1 in a million. x

This has such a soft and playful tone to it, but you can still tell it's your writing! I love the lines "whisper softly and gently like a feather". Great visual imagery is present throughout this piece. Great job girl :)

Agree with crystal - that's a lovely line and a thoughtful poem.

Wow! This writing is very just. How fantastically you have written this! The stream of every stanza is incredible. You are truly a very different and amazing kind of poet.

The first stanza is my Favourite.

There's a great work of mind I'm viewing here. The words you have used in very impressive. I sense this song really seeps into my veins.

Well done. 5 out of 5 STARS

Its beautiful momma

How beautiful, Mori. I think this is one of the best poems from you. It's a different perspective to see ourselves as song, you made me ponder upon this!

Excellent read, thank you for sharing.

Its really a good one, the last stanza of the poem

""I'm a song that was created by
God, then later given to you like a
blessing...

I'm the song that
no one knows.""

gave me goosebumps! not a bad one, a good one :)

you got the talent, and will love to read more of your writings soon!

keep it up!

It's beautiful.

Music is the light that shines its path within and ahead for eternity.