by The Moon Goddess Jun 26, 2015
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I hear their screams fill the air. |
I think this poem could fit well too, in the dark category. It is very unsettling, the idea of being buried alive. I like how you set the situation up - the screams being the first things you were, disembodied screams belonging to buried bodies, leading into your bodily scream, from your dying, buried body. |
by Ben Pickard
I like it - it has a very particular feel to it. |