Comments : Wistful wonder

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    True poetry; some lovely lines here. "Petals dance shoulder to shoulder". One of many lines I could choose from - it starts there and goes on. Wonderful stuff.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful descriptive poem, loved how you made me see the flowers and the feeling of gentle beauty they provide.
    Well done, Michael!

    5/5 Ingrid x