Comments : Your Memories

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love the last four lines of this. Great write.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    I'm pretty interested to read more poems by you, a smooth flow and very lovely piece here.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Flooding memories swiping through the valleys of life carrying the very voice you miss more. ... I love the expression and the mood set in this poem. The flow is great, the words used makes it explanatory.

    The overwhelming feeling of de javu..

    I can relate to this. May you always find comfort at all time.

    • 9 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you everyone.

  • 9 years ago

    by nancy

    Really heart touching poem and I can really feel whatever u felt while writing it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Wonderfully written.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You find that special someone all is wonderful, beautiful and each moment is precious for that person becomes a part of you. Then all is gone with his/her departure. Questions, yearning, pain, memories and wondering and the worst part of all waiting...waiting for that one person to come back-that is the killer.

    Touching write...take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Ankita

    Praise worthy write...n so mesmerizing

  • 9 years ago

    by Sai Vara Prasad Potharaju

    Beautifully felt and written... 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Praiseworthy... hope u meet the person whom u referred once again...I know for u it might be impossible but dont forget the word impossible itself says I m possible

  • 9 years ago

    by nancy

    Adorable and stupendous piece.beautifully felt and written .......................nd really very mesmerizing.