by Ben Pickard
Love the last four lines of this. Great write. |
by GB
I'm pretty interested to read more poems by you, a smooth flow and very lovely piece here. |
by DarkLight
Flooding memories swiping through the valleys of life carrying the very voice you miss more. ... I love the expression and the mood set in this poem. The flow is great, the words used makes it explanatory. |
by Shruti
Thank you everyone. |
by nancy
Really heart touching poem and I can really feel whatever u felt while writing it. |
by Shruti
Thanks. |
by Naughtymouse
Wonderfully written. |
by Meena Krish
You find that special someone all is wonderful, beautiful and each moment is precious for that person becomes a part of you. Then all is gone with his/her departure. Questions, yearning, pain, memories and wondering and the worst part of all waiting...waiting for that one person to come back-that is the killer. |
by Shruti
Thank you. |
by Ankita
Praise worthy write...n so mesmerizing |
Beautifully felt and written... 5/5 |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
Praiseworthy... hope u meet the person whom u referred once again...I know for u it might be impossible but dont forget the word impossible itself says I m possible |
by nancy
Adorable and stupendous piece.beautifully felt and written .......................nd really very mesmerizing. |