by A dust in the air Jun 30, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Oh how sad, |
by Azrael
Well written, I do enjoy the symbolism that you used. Makes you think. |
by DarkLight
Well written. |
by BlueJay
This is an interesting concept, although the piece feels a little too basic - at least for my taste. The structuring works well but the word choice and voice are bland. Again, decent concept and I'd like to read more from you, but 3/5 from me for now. |
by nancy
Very nice poem. |
by Beautiful Soul
Welcome to pandq. This is a wonderful poem. :) nominated |