The birth of summer
by The Poet Behind The Poems Jul 6, 2015
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Soft hands caress colours of the rainbow, |
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7 years agoby Naughtymouse
Love this!
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9 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
I agree with everyone here. you did an excellent job in the details about your feelings of summer, and also you did a great job in describing more than one sense, it seems like you used sight and smell to give the reader an idea of what you are seeing within summer. that in itself is a great thing. actually you used feel as well. Connecting senses together is difficult a lot of times because it throws the meaning off the poem, but it doesn't here at all. 5
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9 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
I enjoyed the imagery in this poem and thought you captured the scene well, and stuck with the challenge limitations too.
Well done -
9 years ago
A beautifully lyrical poem with wonderful imagery. I loved this and it fitted the brief perfectly. Well done. :)
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9 years ago
A beautifully lyrical poem with wonderful imagery. I loved this and it fitted the brief perfectly. Well done. :)
