Imaginative write Tony - very clever. I love how you've split it in two, it works brilliantly.

Wow tony this poem is truly powerful and I like how you brought a twist to the story with john and jane doe. As Ben said I really like how you did two sides of the story to each of them. There is always two sides to every story indeed. It seems like for john he is trying to cleanse his sins away, and it is the same thing for Jane. Another interesting aspect to the poem, it seems to me that Each one is telling the others story through their perspective. 5/5

Nice! Lved it

Ok, so you just made mine worth nothing! Nominated and I am amazed by it :)

Interesting

This is what they call shamazing!!